Hano, I really like how you used the sentence starter Suddenly. That make the reader want to read on. A really effective piece of writing. Also, your handwriting is really neat. Well Done! Reply
I love that piece of writing.well done!!!!
well done!!! That was a very exiting story.
Hano, I really like how you used the sentence starter Suddenly. That make the reader want to read on. A really effective piece of writing. Also, your handwriting is really neat. Well Done!
I liked your story
You have very neat handwriting! Well Done!
I like how you put a struck of lightning not just lightning hit the sail. Well done!
I love your cursive writing.
great work