Year 6 have been studying ‘A Midsummer Nights Dream’. We imagined we were Hermia writing a letter to Egeus ( her father) trying to persuade him to let her marry her true love, Lysander.
Year 6 have been studying ‘A Midsummer Nights Dream’. We imagined we were Hermia writing a letter to Egeus ( her father) trying to persuade him to let her marry her true love, Lysander.
You have written a loving and persuasive letter. I hope her father changes his mind.
You have neat handwriting. I really enjoyed reading the story and I liked the ending.
I liked your persuasive letter. Well done!
Yes a very persuasive letter
Cool but improve
Maybe its qiut bad
Not as bad as bad but good
that is great
Really good work! Well done. I hope you will write more persuasive letters.