I really enjoyed reading your story ,my story is called Spectacular Mr Shark.Next time make sure your capital letters are bigger. Lucio. Reply
Poor Mr Rat! Do you think his tail will grow back?
I really enjoyed reading your story ,my story is called Spectacular Mr Shark.Next time make sure your capital letters are bigger. Lucio.
Castor I like reading your story and your amazing adjecteves
and also like your handwriteing.
I liked you emotion sentence and your handwriting.
Iliked your story
Probably his tail won’t grow back Mrs Kan.
well done I really enjoyed reading your story.
Well done I really enjoyed reading your story.
Well done Castor I really enjoyed reading your story.
Castor good opening, it made be want to read on.
Well done l really enjoyed your story.
Well done castor. I like your story.
Your story was interesting, and had good use of adjectives. Well done.
Soumili
I enjoyed your story.
I liked the name for your chef.
I enjoyed your story. I liked the name you chose for the chef
I enjoyed your story.I like your name you chose for your chef.
Amazing story Castor.Well done good handwritting
I enjoyed reading your story.Well done.
I enjoyed your story.Well done.
I liked your story
I enjoyed reading your story.
Well done good use of punctuation . We really enjoyed reading your story. It made us laugh.
I like how you used adjectives to add detail to your story.
Well Done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!You should be proud of your self!
AGREE SO MUCH
I really liked your writing Castor.Have you thought about what will happen next?
I enjoyed reading your story Castor.Your story was really exciting.
The story was great. We like your handwriting.
I feel sorry for head chef Mosure. Do you think he will ever catch him?
I liked your use of adjectives
I liked your use of punctuation Castor
well done castor
I like your handwriting.WOW!!!!!!!!!! Well done.
Wonderful story Castor. I love it.
WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very neat hand writing wow! I wish i could write like that.
Very nice handwriting!!!
I like your story maybe when your older you can be an author.
great
It was the best story ever. Please write more.
Good story
Really good story Castor good use of openers
I really liked your story .
Castor your handwriteing was the best and your amazing story.
Fantastic adjectives and punctuation.