13 thoughts on “Year 3 Poetry Swimming Pool by Charlotte”

  1. Well Done Charlottle I know you”ve been working on it and now look whats HAPPEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. Well done Charlotte it looks like you’ve worked really hard on your poem. I really like your use of ALLITERATION 🙂
    Wow! You used personification and great adjectives.

  3. What a great poem , the handwriting is nice , so many good adjectives and personification! Well done!

  4. your use of personification is amazing also your adjectives it looks like you worked really hard keep it up WELL DONE!!!

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