Year 3 have been writing their own versions of Fantastic Mr Fox. Siena wrote a fantastic story about Remarkable Mr Rat.
17 thoughts on “Remarkable Mr Rat – a story by Siena 3J”
What a wonderful story Siena. I like how cunning Mr Rat is but I do feel a little bit sorry for the poor chef. Do you think Pierre and Mr Rat can share the food in the restaurant?
What a wonderful story Siena. I like how cunning Mr Rat is but I do feel a little bit sorry for the poor chef. Do you think Pierre and Mr Rat can share the food in the restaurant?
Very proud of my daughter ! Excellent short story !
What a fabulous story!
Well done Siena. It is fabulous story.
Well done Siena.
Thank you!
I love your story
Well done Siena.I enjoyed your story.
I love your story Siena. Well done! I liked your use of adjectives.
We really liked your story because the 3ed sentences really brought it to life. We really like your handwriting too.
Thank you !
Thank You!!!!
I really enjoyed your story Siena, I thought the words in capital gave it a lot of detail.
I really enjoyed your story Siena. The words in capitals gave it a lot of detail.
well done
Well done Siena What a fabulous story.
Well done Siena. We really enjoyed your story.