Charis from Chestnut class retold the story of the ‘The Leopards Drum’ using adjectives and fantastic sentence openers.
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Some great vocabulary Charis – ‘boastful’ and ‘clawed’ – and the use of speech marks really brings your story to life!
It’s hard to think of ways to improve it, but if you could make any changes what would they be?
Some great vocabulary Charis – ‘boastful’ and ‘clawed’ – and the use of speech marks really brings your story to life!
It’s hard to think of ways to improve it, but if you could make any changes what would they be?
very good
Well done Charis!Great use of adjectives! Next time you could use the rule’ new speaker new line’
WOW!Well done!!! I still remember when we retold the leopards drum.I like your handwriting.It’s very neat.
WOW! Very neat handwriting and remember to use different words for said.