Alfie in 3J wrote a newspaper article about an expedition to the Arctic.
Zofia in 3H wrote a very interesting newspaper report about an expedition to the Arctic.
Alfie in 3J wrote a newspaper article about an expedition to the Arctic.
Zofia in 3H wrote a very interesting newspaper report about an expedition to the Arctic.
A very interesting article Alfie. As I was reading it, I felt like I was part of the expedition.
yes you are a part of the expedition
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. I enjoyed learning about the expedition and writing the article.
Alfie
Another interesting article. Would Zofia be willing to be part of an expedition to the Arctic?
yes she is from Antartica and she is going on a school trip with 3h to see Lars,Alex and Erica
Very dramatic accounts.
They did indeed sound close to death. I thought the part with pus oozing from the finger was particularly icky!
I’ve always wanted to visit the arctic – but now I’m not sure I’d be brave enough!
yes Mr King very dramatic accounts
Fantastic work, we really enjoyed reading this. We remember writing this when we were in year 3.
We really liked your 3rd sentence , we have been learning about them too. We are impressed that even in year 3 you are using them.
Sounds like the explorers had a very lucky escape from the polar bear!! You painted a very scary picture Alfie. Well done.
A really good article Zofia. I felt quite relieved when the explorers made it back safely for their tea and hot dinner!
Wow that’s an amazing piece of writing I remember when I had to do that piece of writing.
Thanks I will probably remember that when I’m in year four
Oh wow amazing I felt like I was actually reading a newspaper Alfie .you have amazing handwriting .next time use more speech marks.
Alfie I enjoyed reading it. You used a lot of adjectives and that’s why it made me feel like I was in the expedition!!!
Kenzey
Well done Alfe I love it
What impressive journalistic voices! Your articles were engaging and informative. I learnt lots about this terrifying expedition. I hope you both continue to write news articles independently as I’d love to see how you write about a current news story too. What progress in your writing, Alfie! Well done.
Well done Zofai and Alfie great writing!
well done zofia and Alfie I am very proud of you
well done zofia and Alfie very good work
I wish I could go to the arctic but I am probably to young . I think your handwriting is great . I cant wait for your next one .
I loved reading your newspaper article, Alfie.Very neat handwriting.
Mrs Kan,
I would not want to go there as it would be too cold and I would probably not survive and die.
Well done Zofia and Alfie very neat handwriting .Do you want to be part of the expedition.
Amazing writing Alfie. I loved the introduction.
very nice work it is neat very good handwriting Alfie
well done zofia you have very nice handwriting.
Well done Zofia and Alfie. I really enjoyed reading your articles.
I loooooooooved the newspapers, guys!
I’d rather NOT go to the Arctic OR the Antarctic!
I feel sorry for Lars. I was happy he recovered.
Lovely story Alfie.
Crazy work alfie.I loved it !
I think you should publish it I bet a lot of people would bye it .AWESOME WORK ALFIE. I remember when I wrote my newspaper yours is way better than it. I think you should write newspapers when you grow up.You will be famous.
Wow Alfie that was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think your time adverbs our great!
Lovely and creative writing!! Well done!!!!
I loved your writing …………… Your handwriting is amaizing !!!!!!!
I wish I had your handwriting.