Annabel I really looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooedyour story! Reply
I love your handwriting and I like the bit when Magnificent Mr Mouse steals Mr Paul’s chocolate. GREAT. Reply
Well done Anabell.Good use off rhetorical questions. In the future put more adjectives into your work. Reply
What a wonderful story Annabel. What would you do if you had a magic cloak?
What a wonderful story and very neat
I really enjoyed your story Annabelle
I like your handwriting I wish I could write that neat!
Well done great story.
Annabel, I enjoyed reading your story especially the part when the mice had a feast!
Great story Annabel but a bit bigger handwriting Ok
Annabel I really looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooedyour story!
What a wonderful story Annabel – I really enjoyed reading it! Mrs Page
annabel great and intresting
Annabel great and interesting story.
I love your handwriting and I like the bit when Magnificent Mr Mouse steals Mr Paul’s chocolate. GREAT.
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Well done Anabell.Good use off rhetorical questions.
In the future put more adjectives into your work.
Very neat handwriting .You should be an author.
well done we REALLY LIKED YOUR STORY !!!!!!!
Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!!!
Well done Annabel. I never knew mice ate chocolate. WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful