I love your story and I really enjoyed your ending. I love the part when Bob says, no with the exclamation mark. REALLY GOOD. YOUR REWARD IS 1 HOUSE POINT. KEEP IT UP.
Well done Freddie super neat handwriting.I loved the part when Mr Monkey screamed NOOOOOOO.Mabye next time use more retorical questions and make your writing bigger.
Fantastic tale Freddie. Mr Monkey is very cunning and crafty!
What a great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well done Freddie but make sure your letters are on the line.
Fantastic story Freddie!!!I loved the part where Bob found the broken cage!
It was so good you inspired me.
Yes I really liked my own story
I realy like your story Freddie!
Well done Annabell.
love it so much freddie because i love the bit where theres a pinapple
I love the story Freddie because it is funny.
I like your characters Freddie. It sounds like Mr Monkey is very enthusiastic
well done loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved your work
What a great story, Freddie!
What a great story Freddie
I like your story.
What a great story , Freddie !
I love your story and I really enjoyed your ending. I love the part when Bob says, no with the exclamation mark. REALLY GOOD. YOUR REWARD IS 1 HOUSE POINT. KEEP IT UP.
Amazing Freddy Keep up the neat handwriting
Freddie maybe instead of Mr Monkey you could do Magnificent Mr Monkey.
Freddie instead of Mr Monkey maybe you could do Magnificent Mr Monkey.
Freddie, you really inspired me.
very very very very very very very neat handwriting
Yes I really liked my own story.
Great story Freddie! Keep up the good work.
What a wonderful story Freddie, I really enjoyed reading it – it made me smile. – Mrs Page
Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this piece of writing because it is cool!
Well done Freddie super neat handwriting.I loved the part when Mr Monkey screamed NOOOOOOO.Mabye next time use more retorical questions and make your writing bigger.
LOVELY FREDDIE. YOU ARE FANTASTIC FREDDIE WELL DONE I AM PROUD
YES JACK AND ANAYA
I loved your story Freddie wow
Well done I loved your work.
super
work
Amazing story Freddie if I wrote that I would be super proud of myself.
Amazing work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was very funny when Mr Monkey threw a pineapple at the cage. I like your handwriting.
Your story was great. Well done!!!!!!!