We really enjoyed your story Eddie. It made us laugh. We really liked your handwriting and your use of adjectives . Reply
This story had me in suspense! Well done Edward.
Edward I liked how you wrote ‘NO WAY’ in capital letters it stood out to me.
I like your story.
I like your handwriting Edward
We really enjoyed your story Eddie. It made us laugh. We really liked your handwriting and your use of adjectives .
I liked you adjectives and handwriting.
nice story Love everthing about it
Very nice handwriting and very nice story.I loved reading it.
Eddie I like your lovely story and you have very nice handwriting!
Eddie beautiful handwriting and a lovely story.
Very good writing Eddie.
A good story Eddie.
Well done Eddie.Your handwriting is superb and lovely adjectives.
That was a very funny story.
Good story.