News Year 6 : Skellig. 6th February 2018 rballantine 23 Comments Year 6 have written some intriguing character descriptions, inspired by their reading of Skellig. Sam 6B Pranav 6B Nia 6B
Ruby you have done a great job on writing your story because I like how you used HQV and maybe next time try to neat up your hand-writing. Reply
Nicely done guys! I love the adjectives.I wonder if the other classes can put up their character descriptions like yours? Reply
What a wonderful description. I really liked the way you 3 didn’t repeat words over and over again. Reply
Sam, Pranav and Nia – your writing is amazing and so descriptive! Proud teacher all the way from Australia. Good job 🙂 Reply
Lovely writing Sam, Pranav and Nia .
We loved your fronted adverbials.
We loved your fronted adverbials.
Loved your comments
I love your comment
Well done Sam,Pranav and Nia.
Well done Sam, Pranav and Nia. Amazing descriptive writing.
Well done!Next time include even more good vocabulary.
Absolutely amazing. Sam,pranav and Nia.
It was great and I love it and I bet it will be great next time too.
Ruby you have done a great job on writing your story because I like how you used HQV and maybe next time try to neat up your hand-writing.
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really like the handwriting Sam! Keep it up!
I loved how you used ‘there he was’ at the begining.!!!!!!!!
Nicely done guys! I love the adjectives.I wonder if the other classes can put up their character descriptions like yours?
What a wonderful description. I really liked the way you 3 didn’t repeat words over and over again.
I like how you have no mestakes
Sam, Pranav and Nia – your writing is amazing and so descriptive! Proud teacher all the way from Australia. Good job 🙂
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yourhandwriting is really nice
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i love your handwriting
your handwriting is really nice
Lovely handwriting.
I can not wait to read the book in year 6!